Peer Review
March 27th, 2009
Peer review reflection: My peer review went well, there are just a few citation errors and organization issues to work on. Also, I need to reflect a little more on some statements I make. The the relevancy of the message and how the use of rhetorical appeals enhance the overall message. Peer review is really helpful because it offers another persons views that you are unable to see.
3 things to revise essay:
-Work on organization and focus more on specific topics.
-Work on in-text citations.
-Use more examples.
9:45 am - 3-27-2009
I think you’ve got a great day ahead of you…I also have to work on my intext citations because I apparently did them wrong.