6 sentence, concept, and premise

1.) A pencil is busy at work on his desk when the tip of the pencil suddenly breaks.

2.) The pencil wants to be sharp again so he can continue to work.

3.) The pencil goes to an electric sharpener on his desk but the sharpener is jammed. (makes noise with no result.)

4.) The pencil is frustrated after repeatedly using the sharpener with no result

5.) The pencil calms down and searches his desk for another option. He spots a manual sharpener and makes his way to it

6.) The pencil uses the sharpener and succeeds in making a sharp tip. He celebrates by jumping in the air, but ends up landing on the sharp tip causing it to break again.

Concept: You can’t always rely on technology.

Premise: A pencil’s work is interrupted by a broken tip. He attempts to use an electric sharpener, but eventually realizes that the manual sharpener is his best solution.

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