September 25, 2008
Revised Story (7 sentence)
Franky enters the treasure room, clocks in, grabs his axe and sits at his desk.
Franky positions a picture on his desk as a red light goes off and sirens blare.
A large rock drops into the room and exits out the door at a high rate of speed.
Franky grunts and commences to sharpen his axe, propping his feet up on the desk.
Another alarm blares, startling Franky to the point of knocking over his picture.
Franky picks up the picture and sees his old self triumphantly standing over a treasure greedy adventurer
Alarm blares a third time, franky smashes alarm stopping boulder and snarls happily as he exits the room