I am focusing on “Is the focus of the essay narrow enough to avoid a superficial treatment?” guideline, before Friday, to revise my essay. I’m going to make sure that my essay is clear enough, and has enough detail to get my point across. I want to be able to tell my story, and be […]

When I revise any paper, I re-read what I have already written. I go over the ideas I wanted to get across, each point, and make sure that those points are clear and legible. I make sure each event I have explained is accurate, with enough detail to back it up, and all my sentences […]