changes in organization
I need to expand one paragraph and then go over my supporting details. I also need to make sure my essay makes sense and I’m not just jumping around with random topics.
I need to expand one paragraph and then go over my supporting details. I also need to make sure my essay makes sense and I’m not just jumping around with random topics.
Heather McIntyre Said,
September 13, 2009@ 12:03 am
Providing some transition phrases to help show how one idea relates to the next one can be a good way to make an essay feel less jumpy. Play around, and see what you can come up with!