charvis’s blog

After reading my first essay I most definately became a better writer. I did so much better as the year went on, my skills as a writer just developed overall.

I fel that just overall i have become a better writter and learned from my past writng mistakes.

I feel like i was saying the same thing so I plan on fixingthat.

THE MOST FUSTRATING THING IS THAT I HAVE NOTHING TO WRITE. IM NOT SURE HOW TO ELABORATE AND MAKE THIS A LONG ENOUGH PAPER

I like that my book rhymes and has lots of pictures. I don’t like that I have 3 to choose from.  Yes, I think it does deserve an award.

The writing process is easier than essay 1 because I wasn’t sure how they graded the essays and what exactly needed to be included. Essay 2 was harder when I was trying to explain my problem. Essay 3 was hard because I wasn’t sure how to write it and how to explain my essay.

I could use smoother transitions, when changing topics. Also when explain different ideas.

Different ways to solve child abuse could be to report more cases, parents receive help if they were abused and take care of children once they are removed from an abusive household.

—-> I’m not sure which one would be the best solution yet

I am thinking the one about parents getting help so they don’t fall into the same trap their parents did when they were a child.

I hope that in ways my paper can be as organized as his. I hope i can find ways to express stats the way he does, and the affects of different things.

I feel that many people would agree with our plan. We have a good way to splitting up the team into two so we can help more people and bring more supplies. We have an effective plan that would help save us and make everybody happy 🙂