captains log

I am still in the process of writing my essay because I have been away for a family issue.  But I can tell you what I think I am doing well and what is not working for me right now.  I think that my body paragraphs will be pretty strong and my introduction will be flowing but not as strong as the other paragraphs.  I have good standing thesis and it describes everything that I will be talking about in the essay.  I hope to hand it in on Friday (lets hope that everything goes well with my niece).