I think revision is always a good idea. I know that I have revised a few papers in the past, and needed to get better after the first draft was handed in. Revision gives you the second chance that everyone deserves. Revising something gets more ideas or adds better quality to the paper. Although, revisions […]
I dont really like peer reveiws, but I think they went well. I like my writing group a lot and If I need help I know who to go to. I do not think peer review days are good because no one wants to be “that person” that critiques someone elses work and then they […]
What questions do I have? Am I doing this right? I feel like I am just blabbing on about this PSA and dont really have an organization going on. What am I struggling with? I do not have the right “flow” I have a thesis and am following that but then I dont know where to […]
“The greatest condom commercial.” August 10, 2007. Youtube. Video. 23 March 2009 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MLdFreZRw0s>. In Text: (“Think.MTV”)
Some criteria for grading our rhetorical PSA: Well written (needs to be at good standard) organized (thesis, and shows that it was well though out) description of your PSA (we should know what your PSA is talking about just by reading your rhetorical analysis) Interesting to read (catches my eye, and keeps the audience interested) […]
I wanted to do this PSA because when I first saw this on television I fell inlove. I am a health promotion minor with a focus on safer sex, therefore when seeing these commercials for safer sex they stick in my mind. I think that they make something so real life into something humorous where […]
Rhetorical Analysis in each of the given examples all seem to flow the same way to me. Starting with the introduction they get right to the point and discuss what they are examining. In the sample we looked in class it was straight to the point and we knew exactly what the essay was going […]
Oh spring break…This spring break was nothing that has ever been done before in my family. The past Thursday before spring break my oldest sister Lori had a son named Landon Dixon. We knew he was coming on MArch 5th because she had a c-section date. However, my first neice was born on March 13. […]
I think this PSA is related to literacy because you are using the helpful tools of literacy, for example, we used a camera, computer, cell phones, and many other tools to get this PSA finished. PSA gets information out to the public using many different ideas and we used those ideas to get this whole […]
I think this PSA is fun so far, but it seems like there is a lot more work to be done than I originally thought. We are entitled to an analysis, script, storyboard, and on top of that find time where we can actually meet all together. Although we have already met and made the […]