Revised Story, 10-3-08
Scene focuses in on a little house and a fenced in yard.
The door opens and Monki walks out the door, carrying the bunny car in his arms.
Walking out into the yard, He tosses the bunny car down and begins to push it.
He runs faster and faster the car is getting all banged around.
Monki then proceeds to crash the car into a tree.
He is tired after run and tumbles to the the ground (lays on his back).
Monki is still messing with the car when he spots something.
Caught in one of the lower branches of the tree is a bright red balloon.
Monki grabs the bunny car and tries to reach the balloon.
He can’t with the car in his hand. He puts the car down and it begins to roll away.
He quickly grabs the car and stops it from rolling away.
He glances back at the balloon and decides to take his chances.
Monki puts the car back on the ground and grabs the balloon.
He is overjoyed to have the balloon and bounces on it and rolls with it.
Only after a few seconds the balloon pops.
Monki is startled but only becomes upset when he realises the bunny car is missing.
He searches all arounds but is unable to find him.
He learns a hard lesson and has to deal with regret.
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1.Who is your character? A young monster playing out in his backyard.
2.What is your characters goal? He is superficial and wants everything. At this current moment he wants a balloon.
3.What is your inciting moment? He abandons his favorite toy for a big red balloon.
4.Talk about the rise in conflict? He is trying to reach the balloon and can’t do it with his car in his hands so he places it on the ground so he can reach it.
5. What is your character’s reaction to the conflict? The characters reaction to the conflict. He puts the car down even after he knows the car will roll away.
6. What does your character need to learn? The character needs to learn the value of what he has, the value of the bunny car.
7. How does your ending relate to your beginning? How does your ending relate to your beginning?The ending relates to the beginng because he understand the value of what he lost in the begining.
8. What do you want your audience to get out of your peice? The audience will remember to value what they have. So many thing are disposable these days so I think people have a harder time with understanding the values of what they have.