tbudrow’s blog

I have grown a lot since my first essay and i’m happy with the growth i see. I can organize my thoughts better and i can use sources to their fullest potential

I have definitely improved my organizational skills and my ability to put more details into the essay.

I think I was pretty clear in this essay

i actually feel pretty good about this essay and nothing about it is really frustrating

I really like the violence in the book. I don’t like the fact that the one brother is smothered in whipped cream cause i really dont understand that.

its definitely easier for me to organize my ideas now than it was on the previous essays.

my essays could probably always use better transitions. im not the best at that.

that would be to put bike trails on campus. i did put why this would be most effective.

we could ban the use of bicycles on campus, we could put bells on bikes and ban the use of iPods on campus, or we could build bike trails on campus. the third solution is the best

it would be accepted cause its awesome, but i wouldnt propose it cause i dont want alot of people there.