What i learned and what im going to focus on.
I learned that i need to add in something into my thesis and cover the topics a bit more orderly. I also learned that my paper might need more support. I will focus on all of the things mentioned above.
I learned that i need to add in something into my thesis and cover the topics a bit more orderly. I also learned that my paper might need more support. I will focus on all of the things mentioned above.
12:24 am - 9-13-2009
Thesis statements are probably one of the areas that writers revise the most (I know I tend to do so with most of my papers). The stronger the thesis, the easier it is to build your argument. I’m glad you’ve decided to spend some time tweaking this part of your essay.