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I don’t really know how to organize all the information i want in the paper correctly. im sure most of my questions will be answered in the comments on the rough draft.

I’m writing my paper on how bowling green should get a better movie theatre.

http://www.woodlandbg.com/movies.php

http://greatescapetheatres.com/Theater.html?zip=44647&theaterid=0&theaterstate=0

http://www.city-data.com/city/Bowling-Green-Ohio.html

http://www.city-data.com/city/Massillon-Ohio.html

I like the content of my paper but if I had time I would work on organizing the ideas better so they flow better.

I learned that i need to add in something into my thesis and cover the topics a bit more orderly. I also learned that my paper might need more support. I will focus on all of the things mentioned above.

My topic for my first essay is going to be about starting a Go club.

If  I could either fly or be invisible  I would choose to fly because I could travel the world for only the cost of food and water.