9/28
Monday September 28th 2009, 12:31 am
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*Academic Dishonesty is turning in something that isn’t rightfully yours. *There may be different ways of being dishonest, but it is all the same. *Copying and pasting are the most common. *Threatening or bribing a teacher is also be dishonest. *There should be citation throughout the paper. *No matter what you do, whether it’s taking notes […]



9/21 Essay #2
Sunday September 20th 2009, 11:34 pm
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I chose prompt number two, about parents having access to their child’s email, facebook, or myspace account. I chose this one because I feel that parents have the right to see what their children are doing online. To me it’s no different from talking with their kid’s friend’s parents; this is just the virtual way […]



9/18
Friday September 18th 2009, 12:37 am
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The video, Growing Up Online, presents a focused presentation of the issue because the title clearly states what it will be about. Viewers can tell from the title that the video will somehow be about teenagers being online or “growing up online”.  The creator of the movie also presented the video in a way that […]



Revision
Wednesday September 09th 2009, 11:07 am
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I am going to use: Does each paragraph lead to the next? I decided to use this one because I know that I needed to work on my transitions between paragraphs. I feel like I have different things to say about my story, but I don’t know how to make them flow together. Right now […]



Plan for Revising
Tuesday September 08th 2009, 10:08 am
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                For revising my essay I should have a peer-edit, a self-edit, and use the writer’s resources from around campus. In class, we did peer-editing exercises. I will use the comments and feedback that I received to make my paper better-rounded. The person that edited my essay went through the following checklist to make sure […]