I feel that my rhetorical analysis had many strengths in it. I wrote answers in detail to the points I made in the introduction. I did have some weaknesses and that was tranistioning the ideas I had but that was mostly because I had a harder time starting the paper. Once I did get to […]
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Revision to me means the process of changing a peice of work to make it better and more effective. I think that this process can be very difficult but in the end the benefits can be very well worth the time spent revising the piece of work. To conduct a revision, one has analyze the […]
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After looking at the peer review from the workshop the other day, I realized my rhetorical analysis was not as bad as I thought it would be. The comments said that I made good points, I had good connections throughout my paper. However I do need to work on elaborating more on some parts of […]
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Problems that I had with this Rhetorical Analysis was trying to get the paper started. I made a thesis that outlined what I would be talking about in my paper but as far as explaining my points clearly, I still feel there could be more work. I managed to get two to three explanations for […]
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The rhetorical analysis will be analyzing the G. I. Joe PSA’s audience, plot, purpose, and effectiveness.
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I think that the criteria for the rhetorical analysis should be based on these factors: Introduction/Thesis Purpose Analysis of PSA Audience Showing credibility
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I chose the G. I. Joe PSA becuase I love the G. I. Joe cartoon show. Actaully I think that it is a good example of a PSA that attracts to a specific audience. The message is simple, it is to tell children what to do in a situation when they are separated from their family in […]
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In sample readings, the writers do a very good job with analyzing the author’s subject, how the subject is worded, and why the author they are analyzing uses the techniques that is chosen. I think that the sample about the Powell’s article is a good demonstration of how the writer of the the rhetorical analysis pinpoints […]
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This spring break was very relaxing. I slept in on most days till 12:00pm and even took cat naps after diligent hours of playing video games on the couch. Actually, I wasn’t quite a couch potatoe, i did work out at the gym twice. One thing that was really nice about staying at home was […]
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I have only done portfolios in English classes my freshman but I feel they are a valuable tool in education. The purpose of portfolios I feel is that it collects all the work that was done and it presents the work to others who can analyze the work and give you feed back. It is […]
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