Peer Review Response

March 27, 2009

After looking at the peer review from the workshop the other day, I realized my rhetorical analysis was not as bad as I thought it would be.  The comments said that I made good points, I had good connections throughout my paper.  However I do need to work on elaborating more on some parts of my paper, especially the introduction and conclusion.

Today in class I plan on working on the introduction, conclusion, and fixing any grammar mistakes.

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