Computers are important
February 25, 2009
Freshman in high school
Freshman. You have enter the realm of high school, and you aren’t in a world of flash cards, chalk boards, and games. You are in a realm of a rapid paste, be on your toes, taking notes with out overhead prompts, and exams and quizes every week. High school is just begenning to lead you into a society that is rapidly growing with technology, and computers are a nessecary and vital tool in keeping up. In schools, educators will strongly teach students about computers becuase not only should students be able to use them but they should be able to know about them inside and out. Computers are like cars in a sense because we depend on them so much. Yet like cars, many people don’t even know how to fix computers when something goes wrong. For as much as we use them, one would think that we know as much as possible about them. If we are going to depend on computers then, we should be indepent and be able to use them and take care of them without other help. Again knowing how to be independent with computers and technology, will make you a valuable tool when companies are looking at for you for employment.
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bcottri | February 25th, 2009 at 4:10 pm
Very nice Stephen! Your audience revision clearly has excitement to it and this is important for Freshmen. It’s great to think about what is going to catch your reader’s attention. Where is your original though to show the contrast?
alyon | March 2nd, 2009 at 10:39 am
I really enjoyed your comparison between a car and a computer. I fall into the category of not knowing how to work on either. I really wish I did know how to work on computers and cars because, like you said, we need to be more independent. I also liked how you started out talking about Freshman in college. I think that is definitly true because in high school you barely use computers but in college you start using them right away. Very good blog Stephen.