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A problem that is affecting a great deal of American children and teenagers is Type 1 Diabetes. I would like to see a solution that can cure Type 1 Diabetes.

throughout my essay i feel that it may show some writer based proes when talking about how the environment brought diabetes on to my brother. I could make more moments more reader-based by adding in a lot of statsitics

My thesis is:Type one diabetes is a disease that is greatly increasing amongst young children and teenagers in America and the main cause of the increase of the disease is environmental.
I have found a lot of information on how type one diabetas is brought on

I would say that in Essay 3 I am most proud of my topic. My brother has type 1 diabetes and i feel it is becoming even more of an issue throughout the u.s.

the trend that i think i am going to research in my next essay is fashion trends.

i feel i have improved a lot on my writing skills since i have started this class. the thing that i think i have most improved on would be my organizational skills.

teenage pregnecy, and the change in music trends

the trend in my second essay demonstraits the unhealthy food options that are throughout bgsu’s dining halls. healthy food is too expensive or they think that students wouldnt eat the healthy foods. the healthy food is too expensive.

the audience for my essay is intended to be concered people at bgsu. these people are higher up at the university and can change things at the university if they feel that there is a valid point. concered students, faculty, members, parents might also be considered an audience to this essay

in my rough draft i feel like i need to work on having more details and support. i also need help in placing the citations