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The most effective solution that I focused on in this paper is to conserve energy.  I feel that I addressed this topic very well throughout the whole paper and in the thesis statement.

My thesis statement is as follows: A problem that has been in the world for a long time and needs to be addressed is the problem of global warming.  Solutions for this problem are to recycle more and conserve energy as much as possible.

My essay could use better transitions from the opening paragraph to the first body paragraph.  I think that I have good transitions through out the body of the paper.  I try to make it follow the thesis as best I can.

It is easier for me to now construct a good thesis statement.  I did not know the proper way to do this until the 3rd essay.  I now know that everything you but into a thesis statement, you must make sure that all of it is in the body of the essay.  The whole paper revolves around your opening paragraph and the thesis.