I feel that I have grown a lot as a writer over the course ofthe semester. My essay one and my essay five are total opposites! I am very happy with my progress! Mainly because I now know that I am getting better at writing!
I have improved in developement.
I have noticed that from the first essay to the third essay my developement was a little on the down side, but in essay five it had improved a lot!
In my whole essay so far, I start out only giving my ideas and then when i sit down to “revise” it I truly write it because I go through and expand on all of it!
Essay five frustrates me because it’s essay five and in a way I feel I haven’t improved, yet getting my papers back i clearly have.
I read my book and i thouroughly enjoyed it. I will definitely be reading this book to my children down the road.
It taught that prejudism was wrong, and I agree! It also had very cute pictures!
There really isn’t anything i didn’t like about it.
I think it should win!