Now compared to essay 1, 2 and 3 I find that it is easier in the writing process to revise my papers. Pre-writing and rough drafting still can be difficult, but when it’s time to finish a paper I have found it is getting easier!
In the first paragraph I could use better transitions!
Doctor’s visits once evey sixs months!
I tried, but I will be doing a better job at this when i revise my paper!
Anorexia/bulimia needs to be solved because it is unhealthy, very dangerous, and becoming a bigger problem everyday.
I want to write more like this essay because I feel that my counterarguments aren’t th greatest and his are.
Making it more clear to everyone about the differences from old teachers to new ones.