I believe that my groups plan would go over well because we have good ways to refute every counter-argument anyone suggested! I think we had a plan that made a lot of sense when it came to reality, and we didn’t have to kill anyone to get to where we needed to be! I think it would have convinced people after a few revisions had been made!
The way that so many college and high school age girls are anorexic or belemic.
I would like to solve it by making everyone get a yearly check up with a doctor and to be sure there is enough fat on you to be healthy and not grossly skinny, it is becoming way out of hand!
I find that I need to explain into more depth how coffee is becoming quite the social event.
I need to let people understand that while the economy is down coffee shops are still bumping up on the charts because everyone drinks it.
To be completely honest, I don’t like my essay so far. I always write my rough drafts by just simply getting information on to paper. When I go back and revise my paper is when I truly write the essay!
I’m struggling with finding just the right ways to cite my websites!
Coffee has become a “fashionable” statement, a morning casualty and even a social function.
This is my working thesis so far, I have three websites to back me up so far, I just haven’t found exactly what from those sites I want to cite in my paper!
The trend of coffee/cappuccino/latte drinking is a large trend that just keeps increasing! I find it interesting how many Starbucks just keep popping up all around!
I feel I have gotten better with thesis statements.
I have seen a few positive changes in the way I organize my papers.
I would like myself to improve more with developement!
The audience is City Council / Bowling Green State University Council. I have tried to put myself in their position, and I could ask others how to make it more towards the audience.
My best would probably be audience.
My worst would probably be word choice.
I am finding it hard to get sources that are actually good to use! The position I am taking seems to be going very well though!