What needs changed in organization?

I need to change the order of my paragraphs to match up better with my thesis! My first body paragraph should really be my third body paragraph!

One thought on “What needs changed in organization?

  1. Heather McIntyre
    12:18 am - 9-13-2009

    This issue happens a great deal in essays. Don’t forget that you can move your thesis order around just as easily as you can your body paragraphs. Make sure to ask yourself: would I rather move the paragraphs around to match the thesis, or would I rather move my thesis around to match my paragraph structure? Take a look at your essay, and make a decision as to which order you think will work best.

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