mfritz’s blog

I am doing my paper on privacy problems with public restrooms and my one source will be from the internet (but i have several of those as of right now), the other will be an interview!

I liked the organization that I made up the best out of everything on my paper! This organization would be so fun, i wish i could truly start it!!

I know this is supposed to be from the first week of school, but I couldn’t get the program working so I am now typing this!

I would chose to be invisible because you could do so many thing that noone knows about, you could scare people, you could spy on people, you could even go somewhere you aren’t truly allowed!

I need to change the order of my paragraphs to match up better with my thesis! My first body paragraph should really be my third body paragraph!

I will be changing my essay a lot. I know there is a lot more I could have covered but didn’t because I kept getting “writer’s block!” My partner helped a lot in the peer review paper, I truly think this will help a ton! So, thanks to Abby my paper will be better written and completed with more of what needs to be stated on Tuesday when it is due!

I kept getting stuck, so it isn’t as long as it could be! I will be working on it all weekend to make it better!

Before I write a paper I go throug h a million ideas in my head! Once I have figured out what I want to base my paper on I make a “spider web” to organize, then I put everything into a specific order just in a column and go from there!

I am writing about a dance organization!