To me, revision means a chance to go back over your paper and fix mistakes that you made. Usually revisions are conducted after you get your paper back and see what you need to correct. I ususally go back through the paper and see where I need to re-word something or fix a grammatical error etc. Revising […]
With peer reivew, I learned that I have a good intro, I followed my thesis well, and I used certain examples from the PSA. It helped to know that I was on the right track. I will be going over your comments today and seeing what I can fix. Trying to find more detail Also […]
The problems that I find myself having with my rhetorical analysis is that I cannot make it flow. I also am having trouble coming up with 3-5 pages on a 34 second PSA without repeating myself. I feel that I have a good start on it, but I am still struggling these things. I also […]
make sure the original author is stated and states credibility it provides background info good intro/thesis makes clear points about the PSA is well written and has complete thoughts looks at who why what and how the PSA is made citation for PSA: Ad Council. “Father Involvement-PSA.” 12 June 2008. You Tube. Video. 20 March […]
I want to use this PSA because I used to be a cheerleader. It was my entire life. I cheered for 12 years and when I was younger, we used to have a father-daughter dance every year. It was always really important to me and because my parents got divorced when I was 2, I […]
Techniques that I noticed in the analysis was making sure they mentioned the the section that they wrote on and where it was found. They gave backgroung to Powells view and stated what the original author’s purpose was as well. I think that in an introduction, you should be sure to include the original piece’s […]
Spring Break was amazing. I went to Sarasota, Florida and spent time with my family. I layed out a lot and went to 2 Cincinnati Reds Spring Training games. While we were at the game, we got Brandon Phillips picture and two autographs. It was so much fun! We also went out on a boat […]
The only time I have ever done a portfolio is in Eng 111 and 112. We basically wrote 4-5 different papers and then turned them all in again at the end of the semester for another evaluation. I guess I don’t really understand the point of portfolios when it comes to re-evaluating. I understand Portfolios […]
I see our project relating to literacy because we are using technology first of all. By showing the computers in our PSA we are showing how communication can become easier. We also are communicating to future teachers, to be careful what you post online. We are telling them verbally that sometimes you can get caught […]
At this point, we are finished with our filming. We have written out the script and I feel that it has gone really well so far. We only had to film it over about 4 or 5 times. I also do not think we have to edit anything. While I was really nervous to get […]