Archive for September 23rd, 2011

Essay 2 Pre-Writing


23 Sep

The topic I chose was the argument of whether or not extracurricular activities are an important part of a child’s life. I feel like this is a good choice for me because I feel as though I know a lot of points I want to make already about the benefits, but also have solid counterargument. I can also research a lot of statistics and facts about the topic to help me clearly state my opinion. I also feel that now that I am in college and out of high school I see just how important they can be. I feel that this issue is close to me because I was not part of many things, and I regret that, so if I can inform and persuade others to join it would be great! I also feel that though this may not be a hot button issue, that it is very important to parents and maybe even students.

1. My purpose is to persuade parents to see the importance of extracurricular activities and sports, and look past the time and money commitment.

2. Extracurricular activities are key to a child’s life for many reasons including, landing future jobs, having a sense of belonging and team, and also staying fit and healthy.

I. Extracurricular activities have many benefits that is is worth your time and money to invest in your children.

II. I feel that being involved will help kids to realize their potential, but also to stay healthy.

III. Having these activities on someone’s resume will help them stand out to future employers.

Being active in sports will keep your kids healthy and in shape.

Being on any sort of organization, team, or club will help you kid have a sense of team as well as belonging.

IV. It is a big money and time commitment from you as a parent.

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