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I think I need to work on more what’s really causing the trend “Go Green” to take place. Explain the causes in more detail.

So far, I’m most proud about so far is the information I found for the essay.  I thought I found great information that could really back up my topic for the essay. What I’m not so proud of is how my paragraphs flow into each other. I don’t really think they flow well.  My paper […]

My working thesis is:  Of course, some citizens are changing their ways and are going green, but some citizens resist becoming involved; yet fear their future. Some research I found is from CBS, a news network, and The Sierra Club, which supports the trend Go Green.

I believe what has changed the most, is combining my thoughts into a sentence that fits my paper, and the way my paper is put together.  I am able to make my paper a little more parallel beccause I follow my thesis statement.  I would like to, however, improve my word usage and mechanics.

A trend that interests me in global warming. A possible cause for this trend is the way us humans are living today. Examples such as driving cars more than needed, our landfills being overused because not enought people are recycling what needs to be recycled. I don’t believe any of these is the main cause because […]

The audience for essay 2 is Bowling Green’s city council. I’ve attempted to speak in the terms in them. Like how it would be a better resource for the community as a whole, and for a certain part of town. I could use better grammar and word usage to make it seem more professional.