Strongest, Weakest
I feel like my stronger category is definately the audience section. I feel like my weakest category is syntax and possibly the mechanics section.
I feel like my stronger category is definately the audience section. I feel like my weakest category is syntax and possibly the mechanics section.
A question I have is whether or not I should put anything in my essay about not relying on foreign oil as much? My essay isn’t exactly long enough, but I don’t know how well it would tie into my paper, or how much longer it would make my paper.
http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/localnews/2008083745_webmetro31m.html I chose this wesite because it is an actual newspaper. It gives a great example on how riding on a bus service is much cheaper and more convenient to ride on than driving your own car. http://www.nsc.org/ehc/mobile/mse_fs.html I chose this website because it seems like a real safetly council. The website doesn’t look like […]
What I liked most about my final essay was the fact that I could finally write about something I really enjoy. In the past I rarely got to write about something I wanted. I also liked the fact that I didn’t need to have sources. I could just write whatever I wanted. I also liked […]
I changed the order of some of my paragraphs, or I formed new paragraphs. I did this because some of the paragraphs were out of order, meaning they didn’t flow well with my thesis. I formed new paragraphs because some of the information I had in the paragraphs didn’t really go well with the rest […]
What I learned about myself in the peer review is that I needed more counterarguments for people who don’t really like the band. I plan to focus more on the counterarguments. I also plan to focus on the grammar part to remove punctuations that are not needed.
Two prewriting strategies I used were the audience awareness sheet and idea tree. The audience awareness sheet worked out well because it helped me sort out my ideas a little more. The idea tree helped me too because it helped me organize me paper.