9/5 Reader Response
Kaylee Paul
GSW 1110-1085
Firstly in my revision process, I’ll look at the steps that I need to take next in my revision process. I have already done my rough draft, self edited, and gotten my paper peer edited. I will now need to revise my paper. As I revise my paper I will look at certain comments made by different editors, and I will also take my paper to the writing lab to get other editor’s comments and see if they have a different perspective as to what my paper needs. This will help me get an outsiders perspective and also tell me if my paper is in line with what it needs to be.
Next, as stated earlier, I will take a great look into the comments that my professor made about my paper. Taking a good look at her comments will give me a better understanding of what she really wants out of my paper and also what it is lacking. Not only will I look at my professors comments, but I’ll look at my peer’s comments. Looking at the comments that he or she provided will help me understand the way that my audience perceives my paper. Once I understand this, I can revise it so they can experience the full affect.
Looking at both of these perspectives will help me complete a draft that I am proud of and am positive will show my strengths as a writer and get me the best grade possible.