I think revision is going over something, specifically a paper or assignment. Revision is going back and making changes to make sure that everything is how you want it to be. In other words, I think revision is like proofreading, checking everything before you turn it in. I ususally conduct revision through reading my work […]

Since I did not have a rough draft on Wednesday, I didnt do the peer review. Instead I had to come up with a way to analyze my PSA aand think of how to put everything in writing. I finally came up with a thesis after receiving help. Because of this I was able to think […]

I am having alot of problems and trouble writing my rhetorical analysis. I dont really having any specific questions, but I am not sure what to focus on for my analysis or what I can use that has the most information. I really dont know what to inlcude in my thesis just yet. I know that […]

“Tolerance PSA: “Dear Parents.” 17 October 2007. YouTube. Video. 18 March 2009     <http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLIW8JWk1RI>.

-discussion of rhetorical appeals -discussion of clear audience for the PSA -message is clearly explained -analysis include detail of PSA, including delivery and the autthor’s credibility -analysis gives detailed information of topic of PSA, and the creator of the PSA -clear summary of ENTIRE PSA -analysis has clear thesis statement -analysis address possible limitations of PSA

The PSA I chose is a tolerance PSA called “Dear Parents.” This PSA is one in which there are various types of children who are speaking to thier parents asking them of many requests. The child are aksing their parents to teach them certain things, such as not to use bad language, as well as […]

Of the different samples of rhetorical analysis, I noticed that all of the introductions did exactly what they are suppossed to do, which is introduce what they are going to be discussing further in the paper. Each introduction told the reader what piece of writing they would be analyzing, the author of the piece, and […]

Over spring break, I went back home to Cleveland. I didnt really do anything exciting. I worked a few days at Bob Evans, spent time with my boyfriend and friends, and visited family. I also went to my cousins high school play of Cinderella. Most of my spring break i slept alot which was the […]

I haven’t really had much experience with portfolios except with english 111 and 112. I think the importancce of portfolios is to organize all of your work and to be able to look back at your past work and go back and make any corrections. I also think portfolios are also convenient when you want […]

Our PSA relates to literacy because in the PSA we are focusing on the use of the computer and being on the internet. Our PSA shows a girl being on the internet and typing. This is a literacy because earlier in the class, we talked about the different types of literacy and talked about how […]