Since I did not have a rough draft on Wednesday, I didnt do the peer review. Instead I had to come up with a way to analyze my PSA aand think of how to put everything in writing. I finally came up with a thesis after receiving help. Because of this I was able to think more about what I wanted and could do with my PSA analysis. I figured out that my main points that I will focus on are the complexity of the PSA and the variety of children that are speaking in the PSA. After receiving help on my analysis, and thesis, in class I will 1.) Work on applying my thesis to my entire paper 2.) Work on analyzing the audience and 3.) Try to work on my main paragraphs about the complexity of the PSA.