Over all, I feel much more experienced at my writing in general. Since essays 1, 2, and 3, I am now much better at developing a thesis and keeping my audience first in mind when writing. These are tools that I was never previously exposed to when writing. It is also easier for me to focus on my subject.

Where could your essay use smoother transitions

My essay could use be much smoother when i transition from one paragraph to the next. This is something that I plan on greatly improving.

My working thesis for essay 4 is ……

Educating children in elementary through high school on rape and its effects can prevent it from ever happening, thus ending the crime.

I believe the best solution to put an end to global issue of rape is to better educate people on this topic.