My most effective solution is for the university to save money by saving paper. Bowling Green wastes so much money on sending junk mail to perspective/future students. It also wastes large sums of money on paper printing receipts for purchases on the meal plan. The University could save a lot of money by cutting back on unnecessary spending. I’m working on showing why it is the best solution.
The University needs to focus on saving money instead of raising the tuition cost. They could spend less money on electricity and paper.
I think Matt Miller does a really good job of convincing readers that poor districts need to improve their schools. I think he does a great job with this essay he uses a lot of good vocab words, has interviews and research in it to back up his positions and really supports his side of the argument. Only problem I see is he used me and I and refers to himself in the essay. That’s not very formal.
I definitely think people would follow my zombie plan because it is pretty fool-proof. Flying to Alaska and shacking up in a log cabin would be a good idea. Because the zombies can’t attack in the cold and we would have all the neccesities to live. By the time our food that we brought with us runs out, the zombies will be gone and we can go home.
One major problem that needs to be solved is the gross food on campus! There are many solutions to this problem, the school should by better food, cook the food differently, use better ingredients, clean up the dining halls, and give us more options.
I think I only have a few instances of writer based prose in my essay. Sometimes in my paper I talk as if the reader already has knowledge on my topic.
i am most proud of all the supporting evidence i have in my essay. i still need to work on my organization of the paper though.
Cafeterias in grade schools are starting to make their food healthier. This is due to many different reasons. The main one being schools across the nation now have a wellness policy which includes goals for nutrition, goals for physical education, goals for other school activities that promote student wellness, and a plan to implement the policy and a person in charge of making this happen. Too many Americans are obese and the United States needs to help Americans learn how to make healthy choices from the time they are young until they die.
I think my writing definitely has improved since I have been in this class. The writing we do is a different style of writing then I’m used to. I have learned how to use supporting evidence to back up my points. I still haven’t grasped the whole idea of this style of writing but I’m sure by the end of the semester I will have it down.
My audience for this paper is freshmen students who have to park out in lot 12.