haasa’s blog

I think the peer review really helped me. All of my peer’s comments helped me to better my paper and gave me some good ideas. However, your comments still help me a lot more.

I really like my rough draft. I still to work on it a lot. I think my supporting evidence really helps me back up my points and I point out crucial details.

Hekker’s “The Satisfactions of Housewifery and Motherhood”, should not be considered as an effective work because her supporting evidence is weak, she leaves out crucial details, and Hekker’s purpose was not achieved in this essay.

The criteria that I am reviewing is supporting evidence, leaving out crucial details, and purpose was not achieved in the essay. I really did not appreciate Hekker’s essay and highly disagree with almost all of the points she has made.