haasa’s blog

My audience for this paper is freshmen students who have to park out in lot 12.

I feel like my strongest category right now is the audience category because it is very clear who I am talking to in this essay. My weakest category right now is probably development, I still need to work on my paper a lot.

My biggest concern with essay two is finding enough stuff to write about parking for 3 pages.

I did not decide to change the order of anything in my essay, however I did add some more good counter arguments into my paper. I still need to work on my conclusion and cite a few more things. But I’m almost done!

It was helpful having Chelsea look over my paper. She gave me many useful suggestions and reminded me of what I didn’t have in my paper that I needed to. I now need to focus on finishing my paper and adding the counter arguement into it.

I started out by just getting a piece of paper and writing down everything that came to my mind about domestic violence. I came up with some really good ideas and it really helped me organize how I want to write my paper. I then went on to do the audience awareness sheet. The audience awareness sheet helped me organize my ideas and focus on my audience.

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