Clarifying Your Purpose and Audience:

I am writing this argument towards college students and i want to let them know how video games are beneficial instead of all the bad effects people see them as causing.

Presenting the Issue:
I will be presenting the issue using my personal experiences with video games and using my research i will present it globally.

Making Your Argument and Counterargument:
Im planning on starting with my main point and elaborating into 3 main points with a counterpoint near the beginning so i can use my 3 points to refute it.

The Ending:
I want to spend the final paragraph talking about the future of gaming and how its reached global standing with the Wii and family games, and it will be EPIC!

Fixed it! :/