I like it, because I get other views on the paper. I also can get different views from the other students, and what they think about the issue.

I liked reading others’ papers and seeing how they went about stating their arguments. Also, I liked receiving my peer’s feedback on my paper. šŸ™‚

Peer review was very beneficial in my opinion. I liked reading other papers and seeing what they had to say about their policy. It was helpful getting feedback from classmates about my paper. Getting constructive criticism is helping in the writing process especially for the final draft.

I think peer review is good because the feed back is good for the final paper but also correcting other papers can help you with your own.

I liked the peer review! Its good to have more than one person, tell you about your paper that you worked so hard on.

i enjoyed doing peer review because it gave me a clue if others agree with my arguement.

Requiring students athletes to do study tables every week can be very helpful but should be cut down a couple hours because it can also be harmful as well.

With parking spaces becoming more scarce, IĀ believe that freshmen residential students at BGSU should not be allowed to have cars.

BGSU offers students the option of using campus shuttles as a means of transportation around campus and down town, but what about the option of using those shuttles to transport students to different locations around the surrounding areas? Shuttles should give students the option of being transported to close surrounding areas, such as places in Lucas and Wood Counties.

After talking in class about the parking situation on campus and stating that the campus could really care less about the inconvenienceĀ of students having to park/ walk far, I’m thinking of changing my topic but now I’m unsure of what to write about.

 

new possible thesis: there should be more bike and walking paths on campus rather then roads for the cars so that the students are able to get around easier.

Smoking cigarettes on the Bowling Green campus is detrimental to every students health regardless if they are the smoker or not and should not be allowed to smoke out in public while on campus

 

I am happy with my thesis because it not only tells about how students want more vegetarian options, it tells about how they also want to promote vegetarian options to students who don’t eat meat.

BGSU should allow students to room together co-ed in the dorms in order to maintain the comfort and community life of all different types of students’.

Collegiate student athletes should have the right to accept rewards while attending college without penalties from the university and or NCAA

I felt like my thesis statement was simple and to the point and allowed me to easily branch off into other points.

Art supplies are too expensive for College students to pay for.

I might in the paper only elongate it a little to focus it on BGSU

Something like..

Bowling Green Art Students have to spend too much on there art supplies.

The price of required college text books should be significantly lowered, because many have trouble affording education as it is.

Having air conditioning available in all dorms with allow students with better areas to study, a better environment to sleep in, and will not allow as many students to get ill from the heat.

Ā What is love (baby dont hurt me), do teenagers actually know what they want, most likely no. College is a time in most peoples live where we have experiences, whether they are good or bad depends on what we learn from these experiences, and if itĀ changes who we are today. But how can we learn if we are not making decisions for ourselves. One group on the BGSU campus, the PLA (President’s Leaders Academy)Ā believes you shouldnt be allowed to date people in the same cohort as you. Who are they to decide who you can and cannot date.

The policy at the dorms of BGSU of the mandatory check in of students after midnight is unnecessary due to the fact of students being adults, it is an inconvenience to the staff, and the policy is not effective.

I may alter my thesis once I begin my rough draft, but right now I am comfortable with it:Ā  BGSU should implement more bicyclist-friendly features to the campus.

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