Essay #1


I liked it!  when i write papers i need second and third opinions, if i just write it myself i miss so many things, though sometime it is hard to find a student good at it, so its kind of luck of the draw but atleast i got two chances.

I enjoyed getting feedback from other people because ultimately you are catering to your audience and peer review is audience. It is nice to get feedback from your audience before you make your final draft.

I don’t like reviewing someone elses paper when its their opinion about something. Especially when its about something they feel strongly about and that I might feel a different way. But at the same time I feel like if its a persuasive paper it comes it handy because if you can change the persons who […]

I learned a lot from the class peer review. It gave me a bunch of ideas on how to fix my paper and how to help out others also. I also prefer commenting on hard copy papers anyway.

I quite enjoy reviewing my peers. I believe it is both helpful for the writer as well as the reader. It is interesting to hear/read what those besides the professor, think about your ideas and arguments, and receive their feedback and suggestions. Very well.

I enjoy reading other writers papers, it helps me get an understanding and possibly even use their type of strategy of writing. I also will use the critiques from the person who evaluated my paper.

I think peer review is a great thing. I like getting feedback from others, it can help to make my paper better. I also liked seeing the writing styles of others and how they brought about their topic.

Peer review was very beneficial in my opinion. I liked reading other papers and seeing what they had to say about their policy. It was helpful getting feedback from classmates about my paper. Getting constructive criticism is helping in the writing process especially for the final draft.

I think peer review is good because the feed back is good for the final paper but also correcting other papers can help you with your own.

i enjoyed doing peer review because it gave me a clue if others agree with my arguement.

Requiring students athletes to do study tables every week can be very helpful but should be cut down a couple hours because it can also be harmful as well.

With parking spaces becoming more scarce, I believe that freshmen residential students at BGSU should not be allowed to have cars.

BGSU offers students the option of using campus shuttles as a means of transportation around campus and down town, but what about the option of using those shuttles to transport students to different locations around the surrounding areas? Shuttles should give students the option of being transported to close surrounding areas, such as places in […]

After talking in class about the parking situation on campus and stating that the campus could really care less about the inconvenience of students having to park/ walk far, I’m thinking of changing my topic but now I’m unsure of what to write about.   new possible thesis: there should be more bike and walking paths […]

Smoking cigarettes on the Bowling Green campus is detrimental to every students health regardless if they are the smoker or not and should not be allowed to smoke out in public while on campus  

I am happy with my thesis because it not only tells about how students want more vegetarian options, it tells about how they also want to promote vegetarian options to students who don’t eat meat.

Collegiate student athletes should have the right to accept rewards while attending college without penalties from the university and or NCAA

I felt like my thesis statement was simple and to the point and allowed me to easily branch off into other points. Art supplies are too expensive for College students to pay for. I might in the paper only elongate it a little to focus it on BGSU Something like.. Bowling Green Art Students have […]

The price of required college text books should be significantly lowered, because many have trouble affording education as it is.

Having air conditioning available in all dorms with allow students with better areas to study, a better environment to sleep in, and will not allow as many students to get ill from the heat.

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