September 21, 2011
Technology is more than just cell phones, computers, and stereo systems. That’s what I
think most people see or pay attention, but do people realize that technology
is used within hospitals, doctor’s offices, and even schools all the way from
elementary to college courses.
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:41 pm
Be’Onca: You have narrowed down your issue from technology to specific kinds of technology–that is a good idea at the outset! What will you be saying about these technologies that are used in hospitals & schools. Are they having a positive effect or negative effect on our culture? In what way? Can you get these details into your thesis sentence so that the reader knows what to expect right away in your paper?
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:47 pm
Very true and a nice comeback to those who are against technological advancement. I hope I get to read your essay because that is a good point that I never thought about.
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:49 pm
I am going to talk about how the technologies have a positive effect on our society and people just don’t realize that its not just cell phones, computers, and ipods or Mp3 players. The technology we have today also saves many peoples lifes. Thats why I feel that technology is not a bad thing. I was also wondered if after my thesis statement I could put in this thesis statement?
“This is perhaps the most beautiful time in human history; it is really pregnant with all kinds of creative possibilities made possible by science and technology which now constitute the slave of man- if man is not enslaved by it.” – Jonas Salk
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:50 pm
I also was wondering if I could put in this statement is what I meant to say after the thesis statement?