1) I believe that I had a good argument. The content in my essay was well. I also believe that I have improved in my thesis statements. I also worked on having a better works cited page.

2) I need to work on staying on topic and having my ideas flow together and go along with my thesis. I also need to work on my writer based pros.

3) I plan on going over my essay a lot after I’ve finished, I usually don’t do this too often. But, I believe it will help. I am also going to work on my essay sooner so if I run into problems I can get help.