In Essay #3, I am going to work on the development of  essay. I need to give more details in my claims. I also want to work on who the best person should be for my audience. I am most likely going to revise Essay #2, because I really enjoyed the topic and want that paper to be as great as it can be. I also need to work on refuting the counterargument with an even better reason.I believe that my next paper will show lots of improvement, as well as my revision for essay #2.