For my essay, I will talk about how the images and the words tie together a good message. I agree with the message and the way that it’s presented, so that will be my argument. I will try to look more into project safe which is the organization that put out the ad, so I […]
October 2012
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October 17, 2012
October 15, 2012
1) I believe that I had a good argument. The content in my essay was well. I also believe that I have improved in my thesis statements. I also worked on having a better works cited page. 2) I need to work on staying on topic and having my ideas flow together and go along […]
October 1, 2012
In Essay #3, I am going to work on the development of essay. I need to give more details in my claims. I also want to work on who the best person should be for my audience. I am most likely going to revise Essay #2, because I really enjoyed the topic and want that […]