The reading assignment had many great and simple ways to revise my draft, on page 375 there was an easy to read troubleshooting guide that took you through all the steps of an effective essay, and if you think your have issues in a specific area it tells you how to improve it. There was also a lot of simple mistake fixes that i have already found inside my piece, like the ambiguous use of This and That. This reading will diffidently help me improve my paper for its final draft.