When reading what might be a problem that can be fixed with revision, something stuck out to me. “Readers list counter arguements that you didn’t discuss. One idea was that you can admit that both deserve serious consideration. Another idea was that to show why the soloutions might be common but yours is better. Another idea was the idea of proving the reader that their is a problem. The book offers the use of statistics which I will be doing. I also thought the graphs were cool but I don’t see myself using them at this time.