October 12, 2011
From Essay #2, I learned a couple things. First, I learned I procrastinate for the final draft. I plan to not do that this time around. Also, I learned I really value the peer review and teacher review, I like getting feedback from others so I can revise my paper better. Finally, I learned that I tend to forget a counterargument. I lacked one in my first draft and thankfully remembered to include one in my final. Hopefully, for this next essay, I will have learned from my mistakes and continue to improve my writing.
October 18th, 2011 at 2:05 pm
I am glad to hear that feedback is helpful to you. Having a real reader can really make a paper better! I also like that you have noticed the need to include the counterargument. It is hard to do and easy to forget, but really important!