September 23, 2011
Technology is not perfect, but it has changed our lives in a drastically positive way.
Can you be a little more specific in which ways?
Yes it has! Alex, can you elaborate there on what the “drastically positive” is by maybe giving us an idea about the good technology has done our society?
I like this thesis statement but are you saying that this is why video games don’t make people violent or are you proving that they are?
I feel that its true. But you should expand your thesis.
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September 23rd, 2011 at 12:45 pm
Can you be a little more specific in which ways?
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:46 pm
Yes it has! Alex, can you elaborate there on what the “drastically positive” is by maybe giving us an idea about the good technology has done our society?
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:52 pm
I like this thesis statement but are you saying that this is why video games don’t make people violent or are you proving that they are?
September 23rd, 2011 at 12:52 pm
I feel that its true. But you should expand your thesis.