The place were I see having the most problems with essay 5 is trying to expand why the characters set up makes the book not deserver an award. I tend to fix these by just spending most my time working on this part of the paper.
The thing that frustrates me the most about essay 5 is trying to decide why the book doesnt deserve an award and have to go into detail with everything.
After reading the book Doctor Duck I had some mixed feelings. There wasnt many things I did like about the book but what I did like is that it had animals in the book and I liked animals. What I didnt like is that the book didnt have too much of a point at all. This book doesnt deserve an award because it has lack of characters and doesnt have any good points.
It is alot easier to get the essays started and get a good length.
I could use smoother transitions for goin to one paragraph to another.
The best solution to my probelm is to build Casinos in Ohio to get people without jobs current jobs.
The probelm I believe is a great concern for me and my peers is that the unemployment rate is rising and that is why everyone has to go to college, I do believe that we can fix this probelm by getting Casinos into Ohio.
What I would like to model in my own essay is the fact that we found away to escape our probelm and get away from the zombies. What i would like to improve is that we didnt go into great depth and wouldnt have a long paper.
I belive my group essay would have people follow with our plan because it is a quick way to get away from the zombies and has low risk of having them find us
The one probelm i have with my roommate is he can be very unconciderate with his music. Ill be listing to my music and he’ll just turn his music as loud as possible. How i figure to fix this problem is in one or two ways either i can confront my roommat. My other solution is when he turns he music up i’ll turn my music up so he gets the point that it bothers me.