erica’s blog

I could use smoother transitions for goin to one paragraph to another.

The best solution to my probelm is to build Casinos in Ohio to get people without jobs current jobs.

The probelm I believe is a great concern for me and my peers is that the unemployment rate is rising and that is why everyone has to go to college, I do believe that we can fix this probelm by getting Casinos into Ohio.

What I would like to model in my own essay is the fact that we found away to escape our probelm and get away from the zombies. What i would like to improve is that we didnt go into great depth and wouldnt have a long paper.