erica’s blog

I belive my group essay would have people follow with our plan because it is a quick way to get away from the zombies and has low risk of having them find us

The one probelm i have with my roommate is he can be very unconciderate with his music. Ill be listing to my music and he’ll just turn his music as loud as possible. How i figure to fix this problem is in one or two ways either i can confront my roommat. My other solution is when he turns he music up i’ll turn my music up so he gets the point that it bothers me.

My paper attracts the reader becaue it talks about what is popular with the technology especially with cell phones

What im most proud of in my essay so far in my essay is the knowledge of what i know about the Smartphone. What im a little worried about is expanding my ideas enough to have enough length to have four pages for the rough draft.

I believe my academic has improved by being able to extend on my ideas to get to the point. What I believe I still need to improve on is making a good thesis.

A trend that interest me is playing sports and being envolved in sports. The cause of this is my love for sports.

My adudience in my essay would be who ever controls the the bus shuttle. I have came up with a new plan in the bus route that is used by Miami University.