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the part of the writing process that is easier now then before the start of this class is the actual brainstorming and getting my thoughts on paper

essay 4 could have smoother transitions in my body paragraphs.

i could make my paper have smoother transitions by going from a topic and explaining the next idea introduce it to the next paragraph making it a smoother transition.

the best solution to pocketing tips is checking every valet before they lesave

”.  My brother and I are both managers at locations, this “stealing-of-tips” is a problem, and this paper will discuss the problem and offer solutions.

In this essay what i took out of it was all the great counterarguements and examples of how this could boos education. so thats what i want in my writng. If i were the author i would come up with a more logical scenario because in this economy there is no way we can pay teachers more then they get now