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I felt i was strongest in usage/mechanics but lacked in the area of development and organization

i wanted to do my essay on parking but just couldnt find enough information on it. So i decided to go with thre culture diversity lacking in bg. it was a hard topic for me to topic for me to talk aboput but i found a lot of information.

A lot of it seems unclear to me in the paper just because it was hard to put in words.

Lexington-Fayette Urban County Human Rights Commission. “ERASE HATE, BIAS AND VIOLENCE”.<http://www.lfuchrc.org/Hate_&_Bias/AHBV/Erase%20Hate%20Bias%20&%20Violence%20Guide.pdf>

“CULTURAL COMPETENCE DEFINITIONS”. www.drugs.indiana.edu < www.drugs.indiana.edu/spf_doc/feb%2026th%20Training/Cultural%20competence%20definitions.doc> these two sources help me in writing my paper on previous history of bowling green and how it was formed.

i decided to add more details about bowling green football to let the reader know more about the history and also i made sure ill my topic sentences were included in my thesis.  there was a lot more i had to make clear what this fan club or support would do to benefit those non fans of football

For my two prewriting strategies i chose free writing and the prewriting page in the GSW portfolio. free writing helped me a lot i came up with a lot of ideas and came up with more ideas  on the second try.  The other wstrategy helped a lot too. It help me come up with my counter arguements and think about others viewpoints

for my essay i will be discussing the sport of football and what makes it the greatest!